Now I get it. You was talking about Star Trek stuff. I thought you was talking about the Biblical Archangel Michael. Good video. I like how you edited in the ASMR video and showed yourself penning it as you narrated. Very cool.
A word of advice on hashtags. Don't put hashtags in the title. Put your hashtags at the bottom of your description. YouTube allows you to add 3 hashtags. It will automatically attach them to a byline with the title.
Using your video as example, it should be formatted like this.
title: Is Michael a Mary Sue? Star Trek Discovery
description: Everyone knows a Mary Sue is just to perfect. Does that really describe Michael? She seems to mess things up all the time. Endearing her to the fans, and making STD palatable. She makes tons of errors, and even has messed up hair.
#StarTrek #STD #Disco
(this is where you want to insert your 3 hashtags)
Do it for your next video and see how it turns out. Also, be sure that you're using proper and relevant tags/keywords when you're publishing a video, which it looks like you already are.
"keywords":["Mary Sue","Michael","Star Trek Discovery","Disco","STD","Jim Watkins"]
Keep up the good work, Jim. If you need any advice about YouTube, come ask us.